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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #15 on:
October 22, 2009, 12:50:38 AM »
by
ca.leverette
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on October 22, 2009, 12:39:49 AM
why old men drink gin
life lesson number four:
the color of peace
is lily green
feathers have no
feeling until
detached
cranberry is best
used as a wall
cover
love is retarted
so we spit
when sleep
Hmmm...well I will never ask an old man why he drinks gin again.
All the information in life is right here.
now, I think I'll go to bed.
sweet dreams,
cherylanne
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"A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness." ~ Robert Frost
Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #16 on:
October 23, 2009, 08:41:20 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
life is full of alternatives
the problem is
i don't like
carrots
they are supposed
to be the wonder
food
cures all
helps all
see all
the color is
alluring like
candy corn
and the shape
is made for
boys at play
"DUCK"
but they
taste like
sweet potatoes
with a hint of
asparagus
and saltines
am i destined
to be marginal?
lackluster?
other than
wonderful
because i can't
absorb the
benefits of
carrots?
nah, i'll be
alright
i can drink
vodka
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #17 on:
October 23, 2009, 11:27:56 PM »
by
silent lotus
http://www.carrotmuseum.co.uk/history.html
The origin of the cultivated carrot is clearly acknowledged to be
purple
in colour
and in the Afghanistan region mainly because it was known to exist there
well before reliable literature references or paintings gave evidence of Western carotene carrots.
It is thought to have been in existence a couple of thousand years bc. (Brothwell)
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #18 on:
November 02, 2009, 05:50:05 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
bullets without merit
the other
side of
envy
fades
from
meadow
green
to deep
ocean
black
where
day
breaks
without
sweat on
the pillows
or
on the curve
of top lips
and light
seeps
through
pinholes
pushed
through
stretched
skin
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #19 on:
November 23, 2009, 09:43:35 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
why old men drink gin:
lessons from the sober
undone is a technical
term in america
akin to frazzled
tied in knots
out-of-bandwidth
undone doesn't refer to
bras hanging from
pale freckled shoulders
shoelaces dragging on
the men's restroom floor
Pop's pants after the
Thanksgiving meal
it's when a man
understands
his useless
and
the poet
misplaces
his words
good thing
we were
almost
absolutely
neither
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #20 on:
December 01, 2009, 02:21:57 AM »
by
silent lotus
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on November 23, 2009, 09:43:35 PM
why old men drink gin:
lessons from the sober
undone is a technical
term in america
akin to frazzled
tied in knots
out-of-bandwidth
undone doesn't refer to
bras hanging from
pale freckled shoulders
shoelaces dragging on
the men's restroom floor
Pop's pants after the
Thanksgiving meal
it's when a man
understands
his useless
and
the poet
misplaces
his words
good thing i'm
almost
absolutely
neither
dear Tiko
not sure if it is imperative for you in the last stanza to have the tense
i'm
for my ear
we were
sounds a bit better
good thing
we were
almost
absolutely
neither
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
silent lotus
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #21 on:
December 01, 2009, 03:32:38 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
Quote from: silent lotus on December 01, 2009, 02:21:57 AM
dear Tiko
not sure if it is imperative for you in the last stanza to have the tense
i'm
for my ear
we were
sounds a bit better
good thing
we were
almost
absolutely
neither
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
silent lotus
Good call.
Thanks,
tiko
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #22 on:
December 03, 2009, 04:24:04 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
Christmas birthdays and anniversaries
opening
gifts
customary
cliche
except
when
they
smile
as
you
remove
the
wrapper
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turning 37
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Reply #23 on:
December 22, 2009, 11:34:05 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
am i capable
of finding
my center?
swerving is
so much
fun
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #24 on:
December 31, 2009, 05:25:33 AM »
by
Tiko Lewis
it’s difficult some days
to find different ways
to describe leaves
and trees, water, love,
sex, or loss
sometimes, a tree
is just still and green
down yonder way
unnoticed
surrounded by wild grass
unmarked by lovers
and water is at times
unimpressive
stagnant
in the holes lining
overused streets
or in half empty glasses
with lipstick or
chicken nugget residue
smudged on its
side
love
sex
are interchangeable
trifles
discussed over martinis
and whiskey sours
differentiated
only by the tellers voice --
never satisfying
almost measuring up
loss is loss
the same mark
across a different
sky
----Silent Lotus. thanks for the earlier read. decide to move this.
-tiko
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #25 on:
December 31, 2009, 10:52:20 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Nice, Tiko. The chicken nugget my favorite spot, but all good. Tom
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #26 on:
January 04, 2010, 03:58:40 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
Quote from: Tom Riordan on December 31, 2009, 10:52:20 AM
Nice, Tiko. The chicken nugget my favorite spot, but all good. Tom
Tom,
thanks for the read and the comments.
-tiko
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Re: blank pages under black lights
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Reply #27 on:
January 06, 2010, 10:00:06 AM »
by
Tiko Lewis
she gives me pears on
our anniversary
says she loves me so
i am shaped like a pear
assume she loves them
too
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monogamy: as captured by Tom Riordan
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Reply #28 on:
January 06, 2010, 10:08:48 AM »
by
Tiko Lewis
enjoyed, Stella.
tiko
merci, tiko.
Stella
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pond patrol
«
Reply #29 on:
January 13, 2010, 09:59:31 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
the sky
has been
trampled
the sky
has been
trampled
hide the flowers
in hand dug
holes
whistle
whistle
all who can,
whistle
call the ducks
to arms
come
quickly
come
now
we will
shelter
under the
lilies
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