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  a change of pace (for CA)
« Reply #30 on: March 03, 2010, 06:21:58 PM » by Tiko Lewis
a bite
a slight bite
on the inside
of your elbow

a scratch on the
outside of your
thigh

a stretch
a yawning stretch
in your hips


knees back
                 back
                      further

no we can
dance
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #31 on: March 03, 2010, 07:26:46 PM » by Tom Riordan
a bite
a slight bite
on the inside
of your elbow

a scratch on the
outside of your
thigh

a stretch
a yawning stretch
in your hips


knees back
                 back
                      further

no we can
dance
Tiko, I kept reading "now we can" for "no we can". The correct reading sends my curiosity all over the place. Tom
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  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #32 on: March 03, 2010, 07:32:15 PM » by Tiko Lewis
Tiko, I kept reading "now we can" for "no we can". The correct reading sends my curiosity all over the place. Tom
LOL, good catch and thanks.  i think i'm going to post this one.  i did it while cooking dinner.

thanks again.

tiko
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  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #33 on: March 03, 2010, 07:36:10 PM » by Tom Riordan
did WHAT while cooking dinner?
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  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #34 on: March 03, 2010, 07:48:15 PM » by Tiko Lewis
whatever you liiiiiike.... ;)
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  corny poem of the day: "does anyone object?"
« Reply #35 on: March 13, 2010, 07:42:51 PM » by Tiko Lewis

crooked ties.
blackened eyes.
rosie cheeks.
mascara streaks.
missing shoes.
horrible news.

the bride was shagging the best man.

no first dance.
no last chance.
no champagne toast.
no groom to roast.
no thrown bouquet.
no bride to lay.

we still must pay the band.
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #36 on: March 13, 2010, 07:49:14 PM » by cherylleverette
tiko, you go, guy.  you actually pulled off all that rhyming. great job, and very funny.

cheryl
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"I have no intention of explaining how the correspondence which I now offer to the public fell into my hands....The sort of script which is used...can be very easily obtained by anyone who has learned the knack...."~C.S.Lewis

  new and improved uses for ties
« Reply #37 on: March 17, 2010, 10:51:04 PM » by Tiko Lewis
a guy wearing
a tie said  my
poetry was shit

a guy
wearing
a tie
said
my poetry
was shit

a guy
wear
ing a
tie sa
id my
poetr
y wa
s shit

i need
to find
my tie
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  waiting for winter
« Reply #38 on: March 18, 2010, 01:01:36 AM » by Tiko Lewis
poetry
is best
written
in the w
inter wh
en the v
iews are
not obs
cured by
frisbies a
nd spani
sh moss
when the
drinks ar
e stiff th
e fire is
warm an
d young
girls ope
n their l
egs like
umbrell
as in th
e shade

*works better as a journalese
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  thinking in the garden of eden
« Reply #39 on: March 24, 2010, 01:22:54 PM » by Tiko Lewis

stand
tall
my
good
pupil

lean
towards
your
own
determining

trample
the
petals
of
wayward
teachings

carry
the
folded
leaves
         i've
         given
         you
to the
edge

now
eat
them
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  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #40 on: March 25, 2010, 11:57:03 PM » by Tiko Lewis

last letter


don't throw it
away

tuck it in
your favorite
shoes

it'll be there
when
you need it
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  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #41 on: March 26, 2010, 12:00:25 AM » by Tiko Lewis

alien love

i
could
never
tell
the
difference
between
blue
and
purple

are you naked yet?
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  origins
« Reply #42 on: March 26, 2010, 12:30:44 AM » by Tiko Lewis


sometimes it trickles
from a purse
a pocket
a bag of milk and beans
a hole in an old shoe
a book
a song
a parking ticket on a windshield
a tea light
a pink tree
a half eaten bagel
a strand of red hair
a bowling ball
a 2 iron
a wig
a transgender go-go dancer

or a
twitchy eye
friday
at 4am
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  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #43 on: March 26, 2010, 01:30:47 AM » by cherylleverette

sometimes it trickles
from a purse
a pocket
a bag of milk and beans
a hole in an old shoe
a book
a song
a parking ticket on a windshield
a tea light
a pink tree
a half eaten bagel
a strand of red hair
a bowling ball
a 2 iron
a wig
a transgender go-go dancer

or a
twitchy eye
friday
at 4am

i LOVE this.

c
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"I have no intention of explaining how the correspondence which I now offer to the public fell into my hands....The sort of script which is used...can be very easily obtained by anyone who has learned the knack...."~C.S.Lewis

  Re: blank pages under black lights
« Reply #44 on: March 26, 2010, 08:28:12 AM » by silent lotus

corny poem of the day: "does anyone object?"

crooked ties.
blackened eyes.
rosie cheeks.
mascara streaks.
missing shoes.
horrible news.

the bride was shagging the best man.

no first dance.
no last chance.
no champagne toast.
no groom to roast.
no thrown bouquet.
no bride to lay.

we still must pay the band.



Tiko

wonderful ending !!!

reminded me of how on stage bassist Marcus Miller always says " and how about the band "


smiles
silent lotus
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