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  Hicok poem
« on: October 19, 2009, 03:34:53 PM » by Tom Riordan
from New Yorker this week (the doublespacing not in the original):


A History of Origami by Bob Hicok


two women in three days        

        cried on the green bench in the park

                where i found a dollar

                folded into a boat.

 

i thought it was the crying bench and cried

        on the crying bench

                when it became available.

                                

                                                i cried

by thinking of all the people

        who’ve never broken a shop window, not the baker’s

        window, the bead-seller’s,

                who sells beads for purposes

                i find hard to list: necklaces,

                        the hanging of strings of beads

        in doorways, the owning of beads

                                                just in case.

 

breaking a shop window with a piece of shale

        the size of my heart, a piece of shale

                on which i’ve drawn my heart, not my actual heart

                        but my feelings of my heart,

                                                since i’ve never seen my heart,

        would set something free.

 

i don’t know what that something is

                but it would be free.

 

and my heart would have survived its travels

        through glass, its jagged voyage

        through my reflection.

 

you see now why i cried: none of this is real.

 

until i can answer yes to the cop who asks, is this your heart

                among the ruins of your reflection?

                   i won’t be a man, despite what my anatomy

                insists.

 

it insists

        that i overcome a sense of resistance when i move,

        that i move

as long as i am able to move, and when i am unable

                to move, that i stop.

 

it would be free and look like a bird, an actual bird

        or a dollar folded into a bird, a dollar bird

                        in a dollar boat.

 

which is to say

                i believe origami arrives

                        when we need it most.

 

i can’t prove this but i can’t prove

                you’re a good person though i suspect

        you’re a good person.

 

you who opened the door.

 

you who tipped your hat.

 

you who ran into the fire and carried

        the fire safely out.

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  Re: Hicok poem
« Reply #1 on: February 15, 2010, 12:30:23 PM » by larry jordan
great read
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  Re: Hicok poem
« Reply #2 on: February 15, 2010, 12:50:19 PM » by jamesthomashoward
indeed. His collection 'animal soul' is very good.
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Cough.

  Re: Hicok poem
« Reply #3 on: February 16, 2010, 01:20:40 PM » by cherylleverette
ooooo la la what an absolute treat to read.  thanks so much for sharing this with us.

cheryl
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  Re: Hicok poem
« Reply #4 on: February 16, 2010, 02:23:55 PM » by Lynn Doiron
the poem itself seems an orgami itself from the precision of simple details, not ornate but crisp words.  the dollar became a boat; the words a poem.
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