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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #15 on: January 07, 2010, 06:37:39 PM » by Tom Riordan

Silent, putting this up to front page for the week. (Everyone out there, see what even the briefest mention of buying me one Belgian chocolate gets you?) LOL. Seriously, I loved this poem at first read and every time I go back, the pool gets deeper and the bottom clearer and further away. Tom

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #16 on: January 07, 2010, 07:47:43 PM » by Tiko Lewis

i too find this pool, and the one caring for it, striking.

well done, and congratulations.

tiko

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #17 on: January 07, 2010, 08:41:12 PM » by Rick Stansberger

Dynamite!
Bingo!
Wowie Zowie!
The best one I've seen of yours yet!

Rick

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #18 on: January 08, 2010, 03:51:11 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Tom Riordan on January 07, 2010, 06:37:39 PM

dear Tom

this is a most special 2010 new years gift

...........and the first time that some of my words
have found their way to the Front Page.

i am very grateful for the opportunity to be able to share
with so many meaningful & gifted pens in this circle.

actually this afternoon i am driving from home in Rotterdam to chocolate land
....Antwerp and then afterwards on to Brussels.....

and stay there until tuesday when we are flying to Lanzarote
off the coast of Western Sahara

so i may possibly be out of touch for a while.

once again many many thankyuuuus.

silent lotus

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #19 on: January 08, 2010, 05:04:19 AM » by milner place

Congratulations, SL, and bon voyage.

milner

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #20 on: January 08, 2010, 10:33:32 AM » by larry jordan

Excellent feature for the front page. Makes calm an insufficient word.

larry

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #21 on: January 08, 2010, 02:03:27 PM » by Lawrence Gladeview

silent i am in love with that final stanza. as always, your delicate fusion of wit and scenery serve this poem well. an deserved front page pick. on reread, that "regalia" very prominent in placing those cardinals in the piece, a piercing red. very much enjoyed. -lawrence

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #22 on: January 08, 2010, 02:27:25 PM » by Sue Lozynskyj

Lovely choice...congratulations Silent Lotus

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #23 on: January 08, 2010, 09:16:45 PM » by Scott Douglas

magic

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #24 on: January 09, 2010, 04:52:41 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Congratulations SL.

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #25 on: January 09, 2010, 06:01:35 PM » by Ken Robson

SL--

The vacuum sucks
the beauty up to
being there

Ken

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thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #26 on: January 09, 2010, 07:57:03 PM » by Kevin Jackson

Dear SL, what a joy to see this shining at me as I logged in.

It goes wonderfully well with the deep white outside.

Smiles to you my friend, k

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #27 on: January 18, 2010, 02:43:24 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: milner place on January 08, 2010, 05:04:19 AM

Congratulations, SL, and bon voyage.

milner

dear Milner

many many thankyuuus

flying out of Lanzarote tomorrow morning
and back into the cold

a warm island smile

silent lotus

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #28 on: January 23, 2010, 05:00:57 AM » by silent lotus

Quote from: larry jordan on January 08, 2010, 10:33:32 AM

Excellent feature for the front page. Makes calm an insufficient word.

larry

dear Larry

such a generous response is a most greatly appreciated gift.

apologies for my late response
due to travels i have been away for some time to this circle.

a warm smile
silent lotus

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Re: Forbearance
« Reply #29 on: January 23, 2010, 05:09:48 PM » by silent lotus

Quote from: Lawrence Gladeview on January 08, 2010, 02:03:27 PM

silent i am in love with that final stanza.

as always, your delicate fusion of wit and scenery serve this poem well. an deserved front page pick.

on reread, that "regalia" very prominent in placing those cardinals in the piece, a piercing red. very much enjoyed. -lawrence

dear Lawrence

what a pleasure to feel your contentment
with the final stanza .....that it pleases you pleases me....

and happy that the 'regalia ' sang so well too.

a warm smile
silent lotus

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