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Re: Whitney from Work
« Reply #15 on: December 03, 2009, 02:25:25 PM » by Lawrence Gladeview

lynn , kevin, rashmi, and tiko so glad this hit spot on for you. thanks for leaving comments, a stroll down memory lane is always fun here and there, especially if it takes you to that backseat one more time!
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Re: Whitney from Work
« Reply #16 on: December 03, 2009, 04:52:58 PM » by cherylleverette

Lg, another very funny, clever poem. love the plunge-line. ;)

cheryl

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Re: Whitney from Work
« Reply #17 on: December 24, 2009, 10:05:26 PM » by Jay Dougherty

I like the form and I like the tone, but many of the lines are just too cryptic for me to become fully engaged in whatever "story" it is you're telling.

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