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  Gubbio Porcelain
« on: December 01, 2009, 06:22:44 PM » by Ken Robson
I feel connection here,
the pull of gravity,
a laying on of hands,
an antic dance in salmons, blues.

What I see I've felt before--
it's Greek to me.
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Gubbio Porcelain
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2009, 06:28:00 PM » by Tom Riordan
Quote from: Ken Robson on December 01, 2009, 06:22:44 PM
Something's ancient here,
and sacred, too.
It's in the spaces, depths,
the light and layering
of salmons, blues--

what I see I've seen before--

it's Greek to me.
This could end well, for me, at "depths," Ken. Tom
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  Re: Gubbio Porcelain
« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2009, 08:10:09 PM » by Peter.R
I like this.

I was thinking Ken, what do you think to omitting line 4.  It's just I'm wondering if you're telling us there what the rest is showing us

Something's ancient here,
and sacred, too.
It's in the spaces, depths,
of salmons, blues--

what I see I've seen before--

it's Greek to me.
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  Re: Gubbio Porcelain
« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2009, 08:46:05 PM » by Ken Robson
Good eye, Peter. Thanks!

                   Ken
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Gubbio Porcelain
« Reply #4 on: December 02, 2009, 04:30:35 AM » by Ken Robson
what have I wrought?
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The craft of angling is catching fish. The art of angling is a
receptiveness to those connections, the art of letting one
thing lead to another until, if only locally and momentarily,
you realize some small completeness.

                                  Ted Leeson
  Re: Gubbio Porcelain
« Reply #5 on: December 02, 2009, 10:01:42 AM » by Tom Riordan
Quote from: Ken Robson on December 01, 2009, 06:22:44 PM
There is connection here,
a force of arms,
a laying on of hands,
an antic dance in salmons, blues.

What I see I've felt before--
it's Greek to me.
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