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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles: Why?
« Reply #15 on: December 20, 2009, 11:54:12 AM » by MichelleBethCronk
Love the poem - my favorite kind of poem with all sorts of things to say about the most normal of things being observed

I like the title change, but not sure you need Why?  - She Brings Me Turtles would suffice.....you ask the question in the poem.

M
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles: Why?
« Reply #16 on: December 20, 2009, 06:26:15 PM » by Lynn Doiron
Consider the Why? erased as I am off to delete it now.  Thanks, Michelle.
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #17 on: December 20, 2009, 06:48:22 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Dr. Seuss?  Or are you punning on the ancient notion of turtles carrying the world?  Lovely poem!

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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #18 on: December 20, 2009, 06:52:40 PM » by Lynn Doiron
uh-oh.  I may have mixed up my doctors.  Which one had the PushMePullYou critter?  It was Doolittle, wasn't it!  [I hate this getting old forgetfulness business!  Better than the alternative, but still . . . ]  Thanks, rick, for the question mark and liking this one.  Now. I. Must. Figure. Out. How. To. Fix ....
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #19 on: December 20, 2009, 07:03:43 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Felix Culpa?  You might ocnsider leaving it alone.  Dr. Seuss would certainly stack tutrles.  And so, apparently, did Zeus.

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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #20 on: December 20, 2009, 09:05:25 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
LOL Yes, some native American cultures (among others) believe the world rode on a turtle's back! I took the turtle as my symbol a long long time ago.

Me like, me like.
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #21 on: December 20, 2009, 09:31:31 PM » by Lynn Doiron
In one of my favorites, the world was all water and a loon dove down and brought up a bit of earth and put it on the turtles back, then dove again and again and again until land and earth was created on turtle's back. 

Yes, perhaps I'll leave Zeuss be.  Just today I think heard Steve saying in Turtle-ese, I will climb on my brother's back, I will, I will, and that is that!

Thanks rick and lavonne.  Glad you like!
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #22 on: December 21, 2009, 06:01:09 PM » by emma bastasa
after reading the poem, i feel like a highlighted bold vowel.
it deserves to be at the front page.

with turtles in the background.why not? any graphic artist in there?
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #23 on: December 22, 2009, 10:39:05 AM » by Lynn Doiron
emma -- thanks for your very kind words.  i will tell the turtles!
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #24 on: December 22, 2009, 11:52:00 AM » by Tom Riordan
Your turtles reminding me of two lions in front of NY public library under which (if I remember correctly from somewhere) Marianne Moore told young Elizabeth Bishop she would meet her.

Bishop's "Invitation to Miss Marianne Moore" 

  From Brooklyn, over the Brooklyn Bridge, on this fine morning,
     please come flying.
In a cloud of fiery pale chemicals,
     please come flying,
to the rapid rolling of thousands of small blue drums
descending out of the mackerel sky
over the glittering grandstand of harbor-water,
     please come flying.

Whistles, pennants and smoke are blowing. The ships
are signaling cordially with multitudes of flags
rising and falling like birds all over the harbor.
Enter: two rivers, gracefully bearing
countless little pellucid jellies
in cut-glass epergnes dragging with silver chains.
The flight is safe; the weather is all arranged.
The waves are running in verses this fine morning.
     Please come flying.

Come with the pointed toe of each black shoe
trailing a sapphire highlight,
with a black capeful of butterfly wings and bon-mots,
with heaven knows how many angels all riding
on the broad black brim of your hat,
     please come flying.

Bearing a musical inaudible abacus,
a slight censorious frown, and blue ribbons,
     please come flying.
Facts and skyscrapers glint in the tide; Manhattan
is all awash with morals this fine morning,
     so please come flying.

Mounting the sky with natural heroism,
above the accidents, above the malignant movies,
the taxicabs and injustices at large,
while horns are resounding in your beautiful ears
that simultaneously listen to
a soft uninvented music, fit for the musk deer,
     please come flying.

For whom the grim museums will behave
like courteous male bower-birds,
for whom the agreeable lions lie in wait
on the steps of the Public Library,
eager to rise and follow through the doors
up into the reading rooms,
     please come flying.
We can sit down and weep; we can go shopping,
or play at a game of constantly being wrong
with a priceless set of vocabularies,
or we can bravely deplore, but please
     please come flying.

With dynasties of negative constructions
darkening and dying around you,
with grammar that suddenly turns and shines
like flocks of sandpipers flying,
     please come flying.

Come like a light in the white mackerel sky,
come like a daytime comet
with a long unnebulous train of words,
from Brooklyn, over the Brooklyn Bridge, on this fine morning,
     please come flying.
 
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #25 on: December 22, 2009, 12:44:16 PM » by Lynn Doiron
Now that's a poem!  I loved those lions at the NYC public library!  I love the sounds and vocabulary and richness of the poem you've shared here, and the mention of those two astounding lions of verse, Bishop and Moore.  If these little turtles inspired you to share this with all, Tom, then these little turtles have done very well.  Thanks.  [Reading this makes me feel as if I've unwrapped an early gift!]
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #26 on: December 24, 2009, 03:31:49 PM » by jamesthomashoward
how about just 'she brings me turtles'?

This is a remarkable poem, Lynn. Reminds me of Bishop. T
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #27 on: December 24, 2009, 03:32:21 PM » by jamesthomashoward
how about just 'she brings me turtles'?

This is a remarkable poem, Lynn. Reminds me of Bishop. The ending knocks me out.

james
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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #28 on: December 24, 2009, 03:47:40 PM » by Lynn Doiron
james, title is changed to She Brings Me Turtles -- has been for a while but doesn't reflect in early thread responses on the title line.  i'm so pleased you stopped by and left me such very kind words.  Bishop? What a compliment!  I shall treasure it. 

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  Re: She Brings Me Turtles
« Reply #29 on: December 24, 2009, 03:52:23 PM » by Lynn Doiron
Holy Smokes!  How did this make the Front?  Just noticed.  And am stunned.  What a Christmas Eve gift.  Thank you, thank you.  Thank you.  To whoever made this happen.

Merry, Merry to all!  lynn
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