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  Re: old man in a tizzy
« Reply #30 on: January 26, 2010, 07:24:09 PM » by milner place
Thanks, SL, I did. Hope to have my head straighter again by tomorrow.

Cheers

milner
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  Re: old man in a tizzy
« Reply #31 on: January 27, 2010, 01:40:35 AM » by Jonathan Bracker
"Attendant" to me is fresh and very apt, giving more than one appropriate image/meaning.  "mulled wine" seems just right, and also strawberries and cream.   and the "not yet".  I like the poem, thank you for it.
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  Re: old man in a tizzy
« Reply #32 on: January 28, 2010, 05:54:07 AM » by milner place
Thanks, Jonathan. Thought you might well have a feel for this.

Cheers

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