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  barrelhouse 7
« on: January 10, 2010, 01:17:35 PM » by Tom Riordan
she mine

she din't say nothin'
'bout dat


she mine

where you bin

girl belong
to her own self now


I said
she mine

baby

tell dis fool
who' you is
befo' I hits him
so hard
he can't hear ya
no more

he right
baby

somebody wanna
talk wit' me
he talk wit' me


no
he a fool

no mistah
you a fool
you think
this woman
some kinda
dog or li'l child

she a
full grown woman
'case you ain't
noticed dat


you notice dat
real good

oh yeah
you right 'bout dat


where she go

she ova there

who she talkin' to

some fool



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  Re: barrelhouse 7
« Reply #1 on: January 10, 2010, 11:16:35 PM » by cherylleverette
this is funny -- two fools talking about a fool.
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A poet dares be just so clear and no clearer.... He unzips the veil from beauty, but does not remove it.  A poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring.  ~E.B. White

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