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barrelhouse 7
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January 10, 2010, 01:17:35 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
she mine
she din't say nothin'
'bout dat
she mine
where you bin
girl belong
to her own self now
I said
she mine
baby
tell dis fool
who' you is
befo' I hits him
so hard
he can't hear ya
no more
he right
baby
somebody wanna
talk wit' me
he talk wit' me
no
he a fool
no mistah
you a fool
you think
this woman
some kinda
dog or li'l child
she a
full grown woman
'case you ain't
noticed dat
you notice dat
real good
oh yeah
you right 'bout dat
where she go
she ova there
who she talkin' to
some fool
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January 10, 2010, 11:16:35 PM »
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cherylleverette
this is funny -- two fools talking about a fool.
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A poet dares be just so clear and no clearer.... He unzips the veil from beauty, but does not remove it. A poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring. ~E.B. White
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