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January 16, 2010, 09:39:11 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Pediatrics, 1957
If your poop don't sink
you're sick.
One foul-tasting liquid
cures all.
Able to watch TV, able
to go to school.
wife & daughter speak
he wanted to
try and control
me and the kids.
I'm not going to
quit loving him
because he
killed somebody.
this is where
I keep my dad
by my bedside.
it's pretty much
the closest that I've really
ever been able to be.
we were hurt
so we hurt
other people.
did I know that
he was going to
kill people? no.
we're standing
around in a circle
with our candles
and this guy
walks up
and says
how can you
even love
someone like that?
I think my
heart's probably
been broke
my whole life.
[excerpts from
http://video.nytimes.com/video/2012/02/03/fashion/100000001333852/bill-cunningham--power-point.html
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January 22, 2010, 10:05:25 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Quote from: Tom Riordan on January 16, 2010, 09:39:11 AM
Blinking cursors
live singularities
like the Big Bang
suddenly cannot
abide themselves
a moment longer
start to expand
their burst bonds
start to populate
adjacent space
with every kind
of flown detritus
from light to iron
totally incapable
and uninterested
in making sense
of itself so here
we spin in eddies
screaming Wait
Yes We Can See
Wait No We Can't
Wait Yes We Can
but all we do see
are some other
dots of detritus
and the cursors
themselves are
still just cursors
blinking steadily
as if in warning
[glow] l [/glow]
Considering that all
Considering that all
it takes to put me right
in Alice in Wonderland
is one squirrel on the deck
who appears to stand
almost two feet tall,
it is small wonder indeed
when this or that
convinces me
you're not and never were
to be trusted
even after fifteen years.
I am what I think is called
highly suggestible.
It came in handy the day
I correctly interpreted
your puking into the shower
stall as a come-on,
but ever since then
it's been a liability.
Of course you're allowed
to smile at other men.
Of course you're free
to lightly touch a knee
in the course of conversation,
but it always looks to me
as though you're flirting
or want to be flirting
or at the very least
want me to think you're flirting.
Of course there is a possibility
you do commit one, two or three
of those romantic crimes.
But most likely, it's just me.
O exigente um Fogo
Flinty, as ill-ground
as shattered clay,
grayish, tastes like
dry dirt with a hint
of caramelburnt
dirtthis is coffee?
Cream pours into it
without a trace
three, four times more
than any coffee takes.
That almost fits my
definition of a demon!
The bushes that bear
it are genus Coffea,
but some apples fall
far from the tree
not every Homo
is humane, yes?
I know you slave
to grow it, and a
caldera, no measurable
rain, just two nightly
drops of condensation,
is a far cry from Kona.
Stillthis isn't coffee
a stench certainly of
garbage, almost sewage,
it is carrion of coffee,
monstrosity of coffee,
unfortunate seed
of poor plants with nothing
at all within them to offer.
such monsters
poets are such monsters.
- cheryl leverette
the men who pinch our eyelids
twist them up
take instruments of torture
with tiny steel rings at the end
and lift off the specks of dirt
that scrape our eyeballs
are such monsters
the bowling alley waitresses
who say we aren't good enough
to sniff their lady skulls
but if we ever take our tongues
up off the floor
we can come back and ask again
are such monsters
our own children
who demand to know
why we are mean to them
our own children
Self Help
The day after yesterday
came and went and then
came back to haunt me
like one of them mosquitos
in the bedroom who won't
get it over with and bite
but won't go away either
I just want to sleep I got
no bright ideas for making any
improvement but isn't there
always the slight chance
that a new day will dawn
and bring something with it
that the old day didn't have
like when FedEx shows up
out of the blue and leaves
a package outside the door
that could possibly be for you
even though time after time
you pick it up to see that Lu
is just wasting more money
on self-help books and bras
that aren't going to fit right
and even if they did who is
going to care enough to say
Hey Lu your new self-help has
really lightened your existence
and by the way your husband
also seems a bit more cheerful
do you think it has anything
to do with that new bra
you're wearing wink wink
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January 22, 2010, 10:13:02 AM »
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cherylleverette
wow. interesting what you're doing here.
just had to let you know I'm looking in.
cheryl
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"I have no intention of explaining how the correspondence which I now offer to the public fell into my hands....The sort of script which is used...can be very easily obtained by anyone who has learned the knack...."~C.S.Lewis
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January 22, 2010, 10:28:31 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Thank you, Cheryl, I'm glad. I've programmed my laptop so that after I kick the bucket it will Submit one poem every three days until the Second Coming, along with a reply of either "Thank you for reading!" or "Who asked you?" after any reader comments. If you start seeing the wrong reply to the wrong comment, then you'll know I'm pushing up daisies (or if I'm posting an ill-advised number of poems about daisy roots). Tom
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January 22, 2010, 11:30:29 AM »
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cherylleverette
You're funny. Funny haha. Not familiar with Daisy rooting tho. Is that your dog? J/k.
Your first draft about the quilt is hysterical. (I'm awake now so I can actually comment.) But best be glad you can't wear the shirt. If you stay in bed too long you might end up that way though. Or that's what they tell lazy housewives anyway.
The second one -- thought the same thing myself.
And the third, well it's funny too. Will never happen to me though. I'm too stingy for wireless.
All in all, very funny. And like they say, at least you still have your sense of humor. Just kills me when 'they' say that.
cheryl
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"I have no intention of explaining how the correspondence which I now offer to the public fell into my hands....The sort of script which is used...can be very easily obtained by anyone who has learned the knack...."~C.S.Lewis
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January 22, 2010, 11:44:01 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Quote from: cherylleverette© on January 22, 2010, 11:30:29 AM
like they say, at least you still have your sense of humor. Just kills me when 'they' say that.
Yes, I think the appropriate reply is Fuck you.
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January 22, 2010, 04:30:53 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
not a breath
it's so utterly still out the window
it looks like everything just stopped
a bad painting by a depressed swede
I can move my head but nothing stirs
theoretically I could go out there
saw down one of those damned trees
and create some change
but counter-theory warns
don't leave a place of life for one of death
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Re: not a breath
« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2010, 02:58:29 PM » by cherylleverette©
Tthe last two lines are mysterious here. It's as if you're saying you don't want to saw down a 'damn' tree, for fear something worse will grow in it's place, which would fit with the previous mood you describe.
Myself, nothing in my perception is ever utterly still. Life and thoughts are always flying by fast, coming and going quickly. When I'm still, I feel crazy.
But maybe that's what you're saying.
Somehow though by the way you write and the things you read, I imagine your concentration level to be far above any deficit.
just my theory-counter-theory (like that word/phrase, btw, and the use of it here),
cheryl
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Re: not a breath
« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2010, 05:32:41 PM » by Tom Riordan
we are so lively mentally and so programmed to notice movement, I at least rarely even notice the extent to which the things that surround me are motionless and silent--dead.
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January 24, 2010, 12:35:29 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Quote from: Tom Riordan on January 16, 2010, 09:39:11 AM
arising wondering
arising
wondering
How is my
posting doing
raises the
question
Is this mainly
vanity
then the
more diverting
question
So what
we have now
cleared off
the bookstand
by the toilet
for our laptops
no I am not
those
med-
ieval
cathe-
drals
french
snow
globe
cities
built
over
many
years
look
like
those
ochre
earth
spires
termite
poetry
circles
raise
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Re: those
« Reply #1 on: January 16, 2010, 10:33:29 PM » by cherylleverette©
awesome. The secret here 'built over many years'. Thanks for posting this.
cheryl
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Re: those
« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2010, 10:35:43 PM » by Tom Riordan
Thanks for reading, Cheryl - and to PoetryCircle collectively.
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January 24, 2010, 01:20:03 AM »
by
cherylleverette
where's the monster poem. hey, I like it. really like seeing my name in print. lol ;)
cheryl
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"I have no intention of explaining how the correspondence which I now offer to the public fell into my hands....The sort of script which is used...can be very easily obtained by anyone who has learned the knack...."~C.S.Lewis
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January 24, 2010, 01:33:03 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
it's still here, in Reply 1. will resurface...tom
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January 24, 2010, 12:21:05 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Rite of Passage
The daily ceremony
for drinking coffee,
tea service, lighting
a pipe, lifting mugs,
and horse dissolving
in a heated teaspoon:
the delivery of drugs
mustn't be incidental.
Man-boy opening rye
in a sunlit room has
enough sense to sit
for a minute and ask
the spirit of the spirit
to give him patience
enough to stretch it
out at least till noon.
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January 24, 2010, 08:30:53 PM »
by
Lavonne Westbrooks
On top of all my other paradoxes you have to add more.
Lovin this series.
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January 24, 2010, 08:41:29 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Glad to hear that, Lavonne. Don't know where it came from but been going with it all weekend. Thanks, Tom
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January 24, 2010, 11:56:07 PM »
by
Scott Douglas
Quote from: Tom Riordan on January 16, 2010, 09:39:11 AM
Paradox 19
Perfect contrition
is the miraculous
shrinking powder
that cuts a camel
down to the size
of a needle's eye.
For some reason I want this one to be about life pounding the wealth seeker into shape.
Paradox 19
Contrition
is the miracle
that shrinks a camel
to the size of a needle's eye
dragging investment plans
and throwing off debentures.
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January 25, 2010, 12:08:40 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
Scott, so it is! What would constitute perfect contrition for the rich man Jesus spoke of...once he threw off his debentures? Tom
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