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hymn to my good reviewer
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January 21, 2010, 12:53:32 AM »
by
Tom Riordan
they pluck you out of a hat
make you more weighty
than you were
and with the authority
vested in you
by the New York Review
you pluck me
from obscurity
and now pronounce me
sharp as a boning knife
wise as potato chips
droll as your wife
now it's my turn to pluck
someone out of something
but who from what
sales are spiking
Wren calls up to say
exuberant
for the first time in a long time
it seems Franklin
is protuberant
the Far East drowning
in typhoons
but now
I'm well reviewed
there is a bumper crop
of rice
new jars on spec
series
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Re: hymn to my good reviewer
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Reply #1 on:
February 03, 2010, 09:13:42 AM »
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Tom Riordan
..moving from Workshop to Submit..
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February 03, 2010, 10:32:07 AM »
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cherylleverette
I missed this one. Will look up a few things, but this sounds great.
cheryl
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A poet dares be just so clear and no clearer.... He unzips the veil from beauty, but does not remove it. A poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring. ~E.B. White
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February 03, 2010, 11:23:20 AM »
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Tom Riordan
thanks for looking and reporting in, Cheryl...Tom
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February 03, 2010, 12:17:20 PM »
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Peter.R
The last 2 stanzas were puzzling me but its just clicked that The N's book was printed & bound in the Philippines. The N who is:
sharp as a boning knife
wise as potato chips
droll as your wife
wonderful description of him
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February 03, 2010, 12:52:39 PM »
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Tom Riordan
Peter, let's just call them puzzling, though I appreciate your stretch of imagination on my behalf! let me see if I can fix it a bit...Thanks, Tom
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