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  hymn to my good reviewer
« on: January 21, 2010, 12:53:32 AM » by Tom Riordan
they pluck you out of a hat
make you more weighty
than you were

and with the authority
vested in you
by the New York Review

you pluck me
from obscurity
and now pronounce me

sharp as a boning knife
wise as potato chips
droll as your wife

now it's my turn to pluck
someone out of something
but who from what

sales are spiking
Wren calls up to say
exuberant

for the first time in a long time
it seems Franklin
is protuberant

the Far East drowning
in typhoons
but now

I'm well reviewed
there is a bumper crop
of rice



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  Re: hymn to my good reviewer
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2010, 09:13:42 AM » by Tom Riordan
..moving from Workshop to Submit..
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  Re: hymn to my good reviewer
« Reply #2 on: February 03, 2010, 10:32:07 AM » by cherylleverette
I missed this one.  Will look up a few things, but this sounds great.

cheryl
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A poet dares be just so clear and no clearer.... He unzips the veil from beauty, but does not remove it.  A poet utterly clear is a trifle glaring.  ~E.B. White

  Re: hymn to my good reviewer
« Reply #3 on: February 03, 2010, 11:23:20 AM » by Tom Riordan
thanks for looking and reporting in, Cheryl...Tom
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  Re: hymn to my good reviewer
« Reply #4 on: February 03, 2010, 12:17:20 PM » by Peter.R
The last 2 stanzas were puzzling me but its just clicked that The N's book was printed & bound in the Philippines. The N who is:

sharp as a boning knife
wise as potato chips
droll as your wife

wonderful description of him

 
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  Re: hymn to my good reviewer
« Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 12:52:39 PM » by Tom Riordan
Peter, let's just call them puzzling, though I appreciate your stretch of imagination on my behalf! let me see if I can fix it a bit...Thanks, Tom
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