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  Poem 12 of 'ABC, Or.'
« on: February 08, 2010, 06:26:23 PM » by jamesthomashoward
Love:

(…O)
…O?
O!
O,O,O,O,
O,O,O,
O,O,
–O.
O?O?

O…
(…)


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  Re: Poem 12 of 'ABC, Or.'
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2010, 06:58:13 PM » by milner place
Like how this also could be performed, James, though haven't worked out yet how to oralise the brackets.

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  Re: Poem 12 of 'ABC, Or.'
« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2010, 07:03:46 PM » by jamesthomashoward
Maybe some sort of visual cue with the arms, Milner. I look forward to watching you do it!

James
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  Re: Poem 12 of 'ABC, Or.'
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 07:43:20 PM » by Tom Riordan
Don't know if this kind of porn should be let on the site but in the interests of free speech I'm going to let it slide.
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« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 08:48:28 PM » by jamesthomashoward
titter.
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« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 09:02:53 PM » by cherylleverette
Yes, I was thinking of orgasms.



can I say that here?
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  Re: Poem 12 of 'ABC, Or.'
« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 09:34:21 PM » by Tom Riordan
Yeah, "The Poem of O," I'm afraid. More seriously, yes, it's a delightful eyeful, this poem, and I also like how the L carries down and makes all the O's LO's. (This is what, in the porn-judging world, we call redeeming social value.) All in all, good beatbox of a poem.
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« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2010, 02:13:30 AM » by rashmi
great performance piece!
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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2010, 06:48:54 PM » by jamesthomashoward
Thanks all. Tom, interesting point regarding the 'lo', which i hadn't noticed.


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  Re: Poem 12 of 'ABC, Or.'
« Reply #9 on: February 13, 2010, 08:41:00 AM » by Tom Riordan
noticing the full parentheses at start, by the end emptied except for a few dribbles, not quite a grammar since it starts with the dribbles in there too, but close.
Quote from: jamesthomashoward on February 08, 2010, 06:26:23 PM
Love:

(…O)
…O?
O!
O,O,O,O,
O,O,O,
O,O,
–O.
O?O?

O…
(…)



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