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March 07, 2010, 08:20:12 PM »
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joseph lofgren
An Irish coffee
in the afternoon,
makes a sane man
in the evening.
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March 07, 2010, 10:06:40 PM »
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Tom Riordan
Quote from: joseph lofgren on March 07, 2010, 08:20:12 PM
An Irish coffee
in the afternoon,
makes a sane man
in the evening.
very pleasing form and voice, joe. tom
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March 10, 2010, 04:57:27 PM »
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Rick Stansberger
Sounds like something somebody's Dad would say. I like it. It's got a homey (not homie) feel to it.
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March 10, 2010, 10:17:01 PM »
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joseph lofgren
Ha, I like that. It gives an old man with a comb over feel to it. Maybe I should re-title to Dad's Motto?
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March 11, 2010, 04:32:05 PM »
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Lawrence Gladeview
joseph you have managed to borrow your words into my head, something i don't mind. there is an old saying that a drunk man's words are a sober man's thoughts. will be amending my afternoon cup of joe. understand the title, just not sure if it is the strongest choice. enjoyed -lawrence
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