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  Troubadour
« on: March 11, 2010, 04:45:14 PM » by David C. Man
A denim saint, famously dishevelled,
Bohemian - as though he'd just left Byron
in a dive in the undeveloped world

sipping absinthe moodily ... The mist
of legend cloaks our wrinkled Oberon,
the wizard with the wonder-working song list

whose miracles are scheduled every night,
raising the crowd, making the lame to dance
that way the lame have, stiff, unsyncopat-

ed. This is what he does, endlessly,
transporting halls of swaying celebrants,
and there are many worse things than to be

a purveyor of euphoria to the masses,
on the road, and on the road forever,
selling himself each night in silver pieces.
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« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2010, 08:32:13 PM » by Tom Riordan
the rhyme play delightful, david, my favorite "pat-" and "night". poem makes me think about what if jesus didn't die and became a star like this, never taking a night off from miracles & wisdom, would it have become vaguely tawdry? tom
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« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2010, 11:23:27 PM » by cherylleverette
very true depiction of a faith healer.  only wish they were all real and sincere.

wonderful job,
cheryl
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« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2010, 12:22:21 PM » by David C. Man
Thanks Tom, Cheryl. I think I'm imagining some sort of cross between the Wandering Jew (or the Flying Dutchman) and Dylan, Van Morrison, Neil Young et al ...

Cheers

David
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  Re: Troubadour
« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2010, 12:43:20 PM » by Tom Riordan
see Van M. as more of this type, but Neil Y. as someone who wouldn't know what to do with himself if he didn't play gig, who finds a coin of himself on the floor every night.
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« Reply #5 on: March 12, 2010, 12:48:41 PM » by milner place
Like this a lot, David. Took me straight to a music man, even without the aid of the title. And it's a pick.

milner
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  Re: Troubadour
« Reply #6 on: March 13, 2010, 04:31:26 AM » by David C. Man
Thank you, Milner - for the appreciation and the pick.

Muchas gracias!

David
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  Re: Troubadour
« Reply #7 on: March 13, 2010, 05:05:09 AM » by milner place
De nada, David.

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: Troubadour
« Reply #8 on: March 13, 2010, 08:13:55 AM » by Sue Lozynskyj
Yes, I got music man right away...song list was the clincher. these lines are stunners...

making the lame to dance
that way the lame have, stiff, unsyncopat-

ed.

reminded me of this...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wYJf4J7VBaY (The video's owner prevents external embedding)
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« Reply #9 on: March 13, 2010, 11:16:37 AM » by Kevin Jackson
Sharp and wonderful David.  What more could a person desire!

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  Re: Troubadour
« Reply #10 on: March 14, 2010, 09:59:55 AM » by David C. Man
A little late, thank you very much, Sue and Kevin.

Cheers

David
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