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  STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« on: March 12, 2010, 01:26:12 PM » by Lester Reede
She hits him squarely
with the correct pronunciation of Thoreau.
"It's 'thorough,' you know."
He counters quickly,
"If Walden had wi-fi then, surely, he would have blogged."
She is staggered momentarily by the speculation.
"Yes, a transcendental twitterer,"
she concedes the round.
But his prime sparring days are behind him
and his footwork has grown leaden.
He falls, hapless victim, to a powerful one-two combination
for which he has no defense.
Her youth, her beauty pummel him,
leaving bruises not likely to fade with time.
Twenty years ago he could have knocked her out.
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  Re: STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2010, 01:39:08 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Ali and poetry. Much enjoyed.
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  Re: STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« Reply #2 on: March 12, 2010, 02:08:34 PM » by Lester Reede
Thank you! I'm glad that you picked up on the "float like a butterfly, sting like a bee" allusion.
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  Re: STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« Reply #3 on: March 12, 2010, 02:25:50 PM » by David C. Man
Excellent, Lester. Somehow I wish you could have found room for rope and dope, but a sweet thing nonetheless.

Cheers

David
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  Re: STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2010, 02:52:21 PM » by Lester Reede
Maybe if there's a rematch.

Thanks.
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« Reply #5 on: March 12, 2010, 08:35:30 PM » by Dale McLain
Lester~ Ah, how lovely, this confession! Smarty titled! Skillfully penned.
~Dale
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« Reply #6 on: March 13, 2010, 05:08:40 AM » by milner place
Excellent, Lester.

milner
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« Reply #7 on: March 13, 2010, 06:28:43 AM » by Casey Quinn
this was great, a very enjoyable read lester -
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  Re: STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« Reply #8 on: March 14, 2010, 02:46:42 PM » by J. C. Stairs
Fantastic. I will now think of this poem whenever I hear the names Ali, Fox, Grant, etc...
J.C.
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  Re: STUNG BY A BUTTERFLY
« Reply #9 on: March 14, 2010, 09:01:03 PM » by Jonathan Bracker
I like this a lot, everything about it, especially the surprising and apt last lines. 
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