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« Reply #30 on: July 22, 2010, 07:07:46 PM » by StellaR

much enjoyed this piece
congratulations, tiko

Stella

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« Reply #31 on: July 22, 2010, 07:09:28 PM » by MichelleBethCronk

Fantastic Tiko! Thanks for posting it - M

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« Reply #32 on: July 22, 2010, 07:54:36 PM » by Kevin Jackson

tiko, a delight to find this on the front page..... it is a precious gem

k

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« Reply #33 on: July 22, 2010, 10:17:36 PM » by Tiko Lewis

Stella,

thanks.

and, thank Kevin and Michelle for
helping me build collect the marbles
to record it.

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

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« Reply #34 on: July 22, 2010, 10:23:11 PM » by Tom Riordan

that's a great reading of this poem, Tiko, inflecting what needs inflecting, muting what needs muting. Tom

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« Reply #35 on: July 22, 2010, 11:49:40 PM » by cherylleverette

There it is! I knew it would be. What a wonderful front pager. And the reading is great. I think Tom's right about the inflecting and muting. Wonderful job!

cheryl

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« Reply #36 on: July 23, 2010, 01:11:44 AM » by Vasile Baghiu

I like very much to see this poem on the front page, Tiko. Congrats! And the line "...when death is not available" is very effective.
Vasile

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« Reply #37 on: July 23, 2010, 08:24:40 AM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Tiko, this is splendid, deserving of Front page and hearing your rich, deep voice made it so very much more!

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« Reply #38 on: July 24, 2010, 07:38:45 PM » by Lawrence Gladeview

tiko the weight of your voice that accompanies the piece fits well. really dig that final stanza, especially the use of 'unavailable' in that instance. sharp pick for the front page, a much enjoyed poem tiko. lawrence

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« Reply #39 on: July 25, 2010, 07:22:59 AM » by James Carver

an excellent delivery through and through

cheers

james

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« Reply #40 on: July 26, 2010, 08:20:16 AM » by StellaR

just realized there was an audio link ~
superb reading, tiko

Stella

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« Reply #41 on: July 26, 2010, 11:33:49 AM » by Tiko Lewis

thanks all. i was very leery about adding the audio.
i'm glad it worked out.

thanks,

tiko

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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.

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« Reply #42 on: July 28, 2010, 05:24:32 AM » by Pam Scobie

Fabulous

Pam

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