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  The Calamity Of Calm
« on: July 22, 2010, 10:50:05 AM » by silent lotus
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« Reply #1 on: July 22, 2010, 12:49:34 PM » by Tom Riordan
great portrait, Silent. the nude Aramaic, great ideas. Tom
Quote from: silent lotus on July 22, 2010, 10:50:05 AM

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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #2 on: July 22, 2010, 02:12:03 PM » by cherylleverette
I loved reading this.  Such a good read, and such interesting characters.  Wonderful job, silent lotus.

cheryl


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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #3 on: July 22, 2010, 03:45:33 PM » by Tiko Lewis
excellent.  i love the ramblings of the first portion
and the twist in S3 with the cruise, a well charted
course, Captain.

tiko
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #4 on: July 23, 2010, 10:34:44 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on July 22, 2010, 12:49:34 PM

great portrait, Silent. the nude Aramaic, great ideas. Tom


dear Tom

glad you enjoyed those two items of bare essentials

portraits can otherwise at times stretch over to the back of the canvas

friday smiles
silent lotus
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #5 on: July 23, 2010, 10:49:47 AM » by Tom Riordan
still loving this, SL. between the "maybe it had been too spontaneous" in S1 to the "Well maybe" when "it felt right" in the last, a thoroughly enjoyable sendup of a kind of personal freedom that makes every decision just too damn important! Tom
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #6 on: July 25, 2010, 07:48:21 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: cherylleverette© on July 22, 2010, 02:12:03 PM

I loved reading this.  Such a good read, and such interesting characters.  Wonderful job, silent lotus.

cheryl



dear Cheryl

i appreciate hearing that the voice in the documentary went well with the voices in the poem
and that no one got lost !

a warm smile
silent lotus
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #7 on: July 25, 2010, 08:13:55 AM » by James Carver
an interesting read that kept me captivated till the end.welll done

regards

james
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #8 on: July 26, 2010, 05:29:13 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on July 22, 2010, 03:45:33 PM

excellent.  i love the ramblings of the first portion
and the twist in S3 with the cruise, a well charted
course, Captain.

tiko


dear Tiko

that you find the ramblings of the voice from the documentary satisfying is for me
a great tip of the hat.......and i am glad that the different destinations found their way
to varying dimensions on the chart.

many thankyuus

silent lotus

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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #9 on: July 28, 2010, 06:50:44 AM » by silent lotus
Quote from: James Carver on July 25, 2010, 08:13:55 AM

an interesting read that kept me captivated till the end.welll done

regards

james

dear James

it is always an honor to be convicted of captivating a reader all the way through to the end.

many thankyuus for your read and caring enough to comment.

smiles
silent lotus
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #10 on: July 28, 2010, 11:05:21 AM » by richardhe
Dear Silent Lotus, very good writing! Just like a lotus in a wind, giving off fragrance! Best wishes.
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #11 on: July 28, 2010, 11:12:33 AM » by Tom Riordan
enjoy this the more I read it. off to the nudist cruise ship we call Editors' Picks.
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #12 on: July 31, 2010, 12:09:17 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: richardhe on July 28, 2010, 11:05:21 AM

Dear Silent Lotus, very good writing!

Just like a lotus in a wind, giving off fragrance! Best wishes.


dear Richard

i appreciate to know that the fragrance brought you in
and i am grateful for your kind words.

smiles
silent lotus
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  Re: The Calamity Of Calm
« Reply #13 on: August 05, 2010, 01:02:19 PM » by silent lotus
Quote from: Tom Riordan on July 28, 2010, 11:12:33 AM

enjoy this the more I read it. off to the nudist cruise ship we call Editors' Picks.



dear Tom

thank you for looooooking in again with those to the n'th power binoculars
and allowing this poem to go on a long cruise.

smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #14 on: August 05, 2010, 01:14:36 PM » by milner place
Don't know how I missed this, SL. What a cracker!

milner
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