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  swimming with whales
« on: August 20, 2010, 05:14:10 PM » by milner place
                in memory of Todd Moore

there’s ever a time
for the sea mew’s cry
ever a roll
to the ocean’s skin

always a sleep
for the dreams
of the dead
to sail
to the home
of all winds



NB.If any should be curious as to why I wrote this poem using this imagery, and dedicated it to Todd Moore, perhaps that may be resolved by reading the end of this essay:

http://outlawpoetry.com/2009/09/01/the-sea-the-poem-and-the-house-of-all-possible-myths-the-poetry-of-milner-place/



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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2010, 05:23:45 PM » by milner place
If any should be curious as to why I wrote this poem in these terms, and dedicated it to Todd Moore, perhaps that may be resolved by reading the end of this essay:

http://outlawpoetry.com/2009/09/01/the-sea-the-poem-and-the-house-of-all-possible-myths-the-poetry-of-milner-place/

milner
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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2010, 05:30:55 PM » by MichelleBethCronk
I'm just going to sit here quietly for awhile and imagine a place that is "the home / of all winds". - M
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« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 01:44:12 AM » by Tiko Lewis
love the rhythm.  
love the write.

moved it
because
it moved
me.

tiko
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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 05:55:53 AM » by milner place
Thanks, Michelle. Hope you'd a rewarding reverie. Perhaps to the house of all possible myths?

Then it worked, Tiko. Mil Gracias.

milner
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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 06:00:37 AM » by silent lotus
dear Milner

the ethereal substance here
reminds me of your words


i wish
to be buried
in brotherhood


from
Death Song Of August Wentworthy



its silence
feather brushed


from
Where And Whither Away




the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth

a warm smile
silent lotus
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« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 10:22:06 AM » by milner place
'the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth'

Thanks so for that SL.  I think maybe you have the birth of a poem in those lines

My friendshipp with Todd was all to brief.

milner
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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #7 on: August 21, 2010, 12:07:00 PM » by milner place
Outlaw Poetry have front paged this with an amazing pic:

http://outlawpoetry.com/

milner

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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #8 on: August 21, 2010, 12:42:06 PM » by StellaR


beautiful tribute, milner
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« Reply #9 on: August 21, 2010, 05:30:02 PM » by Tom Riordan
Feel the rolling of the swells, very nice indeed, Milner! Tom
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« Reply #10 on: August 21, 2010, 07:02:09 PM » by silent lotus



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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #11 on: August 22, 2010, 05:28:18 AM » by milner place
Thanks, Stella, Tom.

Yes, Sl, that's the pic Outlaw Poetry chose to go with this. A brilliant choice, in my view.

Cheers

milner
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« Reply #12 on: August 22, 2010, 03:26:10 PM » by Lynn Doiron
I find myself very moved by this poem, milner.  I wish I could say how much.

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« Reply #13 on: August 23, 2010, 05:36:26 AM » by milner place
That you're the second person to say they were 'moved' by this, Lynn (Tiko the other), really makes me feel that this is doing its job. Many thanks

milner
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- Antonio Machado

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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #14 on: August 23, 2010, 07:28:35 AM » by silent lotus

'the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth'

Thanks so for that SL.  I think maybe you have the birth of a poem in those lines

My friendshipp with Todd was all to brief.

milner


dear Milner

seriously, i have never song fado together with anyone before
would you care to collaborate ?

we could ask Jay Dougherty for the key to the back room
where he keeps the porto and pens.

if sounds interesting send a pm.

vagabond smiles
silent lotus
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« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2010, 06:16:03 AM » by milner place
Fados, Sl, can hold a beautiful sadness. But a fado sung (if that's not stretching the word to its extreme limits) by me, would best be described as a handy tool for an inquisitor.

Swans sing before they die
'twere better thing
if certain persons die
before they sing

or something like that

Cheers

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

Latest book 'naked invitation' $15 or £10, p&p inc milnerplace@msn.com

  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #16 on: August 25, 2010, 09:35:30 AM » by silent lotus
'the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble
that keep vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth'

Thanks so for that SL.  I think maybe you have the birth of a poem in those lines

My friendshipp with Todd was all to brief.

milner




Fados, Sl, can hold a beautiful sadness. But a fado sung (if that's not stretching the word to its extreme limits) by me, would best be described as a handy tool for an inquisitor.

Swans sing before they die
'twere better thing
if certain persons die
before they sing

or something like that

Cheers

milner


swans
sing before they die
'twere better thing if certain persons die before they sing
the threads of an outlaw beyond the ins and outs of silk and thimble

keep
that vagabond vividness alive
and friendship...
truth



~~~
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  swimming with whales
« Reply #17 on: August 25, 2010, 10:58:26 AM » by Michelle Beth Cronk
I stayed with that image a long while Milner & I'm sure I can venture to say - it will stay with me.... Love the picture

M
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  Re: swimming with whales
« Reply #18 on: August 25, 2010, 07:18:45 PM » by milner place
As I breathe, I'll try, SL.

Glad it has stood the test of time, Michelle. Thank you

milner
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