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  And Then
« on: August 22, 2010, 09:50:43 PM » by Rick Stansberger
She kissed her prince and he became a frog.
It amazed her how many princes that happened to.
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  Re: And Then
« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2010, 08:02:50 AM » by Tom Riordan
You're creating a very distinct genre or style or something, Rick.
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« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2010, 08:53:53 AM » by silent lotus
Stark, Ohio
by Rick Stansberger

a book of story poems, is available from author, for $10, shipping free.
 

Avoid this book if you lack a sense of humor.


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  Re: And Then
« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2010, 12:49:29 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Naw, Tom, Brautigan and Bill Knott (St. Geraud) did it first.
Thanks, Silent, for the ad.

Rick
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« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2010, 04:04:48 PM » by MichelleBethCronk
what I love is the nonchalantness of her amazement - she continues to kiss them even though it keeps happening....

lol

I need to look those two up and do some reading

Cronk
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« Reply #5 on: August 23, 2010, 04:22:37 PM » by Tom Riordan
she may like frogs, or be a frog. there's quite a bit of interspecies kissing in this land.
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« Reply #6 on: August 27, 2010, 05:21:38 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Cronk,

Desperation?  What's a Princess without a Prince for happy-ever-aftering in the once upon a time?  (Now she'd get a dog and go to yoga classes.)
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« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 10:06:50 PM » by Lynn Doiron
funny.  but in a twisted way, not so much.  seems like we often [women or men, girls or boys] think we've a prince/princess, but in the morning there're warts we just couldn't see in the heat.

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  Re: And Then
« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2010, 10:32:53 PM » by cherylleverette
lol @ Tom's last remark--interalienkissing, lol.

Really like this Rick.  I think what I like best is use of the word 'amazement'--she's in realization of something new, but still innocent, not bitter.  Love it.

cheryl

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  Re: And Then
« Reply #9 on: September 01, 2010, 03:03:36 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Thanks, all.  Moving this up to Submit.
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  Re: And Then
« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2010, 11:55:36 PM » by Jonathan Bracker
I would be interested to see this made longer; it seems a summation rather than a poem, to me. . . but it is intriguing, and I want to know more about her. 
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« Reply #11 on: September 05, 2010, 08:04:32 PM » by Rick Stansberger
Jonathan, I'm interested in the difference between summation and poem.  Can you elaborate?
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  Re: And Then
« Reply #12 on: September 05, 2010, 08:16:18 PM » by Jonathan Bracker
To put it another way, in this one it seems to me you encourage the reader to imagine the characters and what happens, more than you show us.  But this may be what you wanted to do. 
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« Reply #13 on: September 05, 2010, 11:49:55 PM » by Rick Stansberger
It wasn't conscious, Jonathan.  This is what I got and it doesn't seem to want to go any farther.
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« Reply #14 on: September 06, 2010, 12:09:50 AM » by Jonathan Bracker
Rick, I, too, have experienced that feeling...the words come and I feel lucky to get them down...
As you know, question often is "to revise" or "not to revise"...certainly we run a danger in tinkering too much. I guess it takes a long time to learn; I'm still learning it, myself...slowly.
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