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training day
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on:
August 30, 2010, 11:19:12 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
the
flame
shall
not
chase
the
moth
nor
will
the
flower
bloom
in
winter
tarry
for
the
torpid
hand
breaches
the
bustle
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
Re: training day
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Reply #1 on:
September 01, 2010, 09:12:19 PM »
by
Tom Riordan
Quote from: Tiko Lewis on August 30, 2010, 11:19:12 PM
the
flame
shall
not
chase
the
moth
nor
will
the
flower
bloom
in
winter
tarry
for
the
torpid
hand
absolves
the
bustle
In this case, for me, Tiko, not knowing which meaning of "bustle" to read is an obstacle. Tom
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Re: training day
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Reply #2 on:
September 01, 2010, 09:23:02 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
maybe the problem is absolve,
I think.
tiko
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...i don't eat jelly beans afterward.
Re: training day
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Reply #3 on:
September 01, 2010, 09:43:39 PM »
by
Tiko Lewis
replaced absolved with breaches.
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Re: training day
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Reply #4 on:
September 02, 2010, 12:32:41 PM »
by
maggie flanagan-wilkie
Some messing, Tiko. Went right to thinking flowers do bloom in the winter depending on your hemispheric address. Maggie
the
flame
does
not
chase
the
moth
but
a flower
will
bloom
in the odd
winter
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