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0's and 1's
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August 31, 2010, 08:03:52 PM »
by
John Smith
If only there were a way,
to make these words cry,
to choke them up,
so they could feel
what it’s like to be alive,
They lay instead
lines on a page,
0’s and 1’s unseen
to enliven, or depress
without concern
for how they work.
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August 31, 2010, 09:02:33 PM »
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Quentin Kirk
Yes I can relate to this. I often feel this way. Well done.
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August 31, 2010, 10:41:26 PM »
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Tiko Lewis
yes, that's about it.
well done, as stated.
tiko
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September 07, 2010, 09:18:02 PM »
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Lawrence Gladeview
john for me this has a real industrial texture to it, electrical and has me depressed for the stereotypical nerd who may be left staring at the screen, wanting for what he will never have. enjoyed-lawrence
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September 08, 2010, 08:25:37 PM »
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StellaR
creative piece, John
I like this very much
Stella
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“Logical argument is what destroys poetry because poetry is beyond logic.” Robert Graves
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