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Re: Sunset, Fire, Mountain, Rain
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September 20, 2007, 08:04:46 PM »
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Jonathan Bracker
I had trouble understanding it. I did not know where it was set. "Killing grounds" and "incense" and the reference to the Buddha made me think it was in war-torn VietNam, but I was not sure. I reread it twice but still could not make out its point (I don't mean that a poem must have a "point" but in this case a clear picture or image(s) was not gotten by me, and the title did not help. I feel frustrated. I did not "cheat" and read the other comments, for I think a poem must stand on its own feet. But I will now read them and maybe I will see what I missed, and realize that part of the frustration is my "fault." Best wishes.
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September 22, 2007, 03:24:01 PM »
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Rick Stansberger
Sometimes the point is just describing what was there.
Rick
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Rick's fifth book is out: Gizmo--love, loss and the passion to know--in the first part of the last century.
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