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  Poetry Writing
« on: September 12, 2007, 06:27:05 PM » by Oleksa


Saps, we don’t need ‘em. Bambi-eyed dames
sparklin’ in glad rags mama pirouetted in, bell
bottoms & daddies sweatin’ for their hands:
fuck ‘em. We don’t have enough jack for joe,
& you can keep your God ‘less he stands tonight
on its head long as the tassels spin crazy, hell!
Round up the alleycats, the bearcats purrin’
on streetcorners all lipsticked: better if they’re
on the lam than on the level when the bubbly
starts washin’ up our way, I say. Round ‘em up,
kid− I mean pushahs, pack-vandals & punks
up with the moon, shiv-shaved bimbos,
yeah, doll-faced molls that do cash or nothin’.
Clear the floor out for the boys: we’ll dry up
by mornin’ when the hooch does, you betcha,
but goddammit, you know we’re gonna swing.

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'Whatever happened to fiery romance?
How I wish it was those dishes you were throwing;
Damn you for being so easygoing.'

-Andrew Bird

  Re: Poetry Writing
« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2007, 06:31:41 PM » by Buddah_Moskowitz
Amen! Preach, brother!
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  Re: Poetry Writing
« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2007, 07:09:02 PM » by Dax
Yeah— fuck 'em

Greta slice, O

Dax
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When critics speak of being party to a cull, then treat you as a trained seal — I say ignore the bastards.
"There will come a day when a carrot, freshly observed, will spark a revolution." — Paul Cezanne

  Re: Poetry Writing
« Reply #3 on: September 15, 2007, 08:14:47 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks
Love your re-BUK.

Keep it up.

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  Re: Poetry Writing
« Reply #4 on: September 16, 2007, 11:06:09 PM » by Rick Stansberger
I love the way you sling the slang.

Rick
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"I wonder why. I wonder why. / I wonder why I wonder / I wonder why I wonder why / I wonder why I wonder!"
---From the scientist Richard Feynman's childhood writings

  Re: Poetry Writing
« Reply #5 on: September 17, 2007, 06:47:06 AM » by milner place
Well slung, well hung.

milner
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'Caminante, no hay camino,
se hace camino al andar'
- Antonio Machado

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