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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #15 on: September 30, 2007, 03:42:02 PM » by milner place

All seems to have come right in the end! Good 'un.

milner

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #16 on: September 30, 2007, 03:55:44 PM » by larry jordan

The revision is extraordinary. A pick.

larry

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #17 on: September 30, 2007, 04:13:37 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Thank you Larry. And thanks to everyone. It was an experiment on my part to post the first version which was really my notes that I jotted down after coming home from an extraordinary evening. You all wrote the poem through me.

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #18 on: September 30, 2007, 06:40:44 PM » by Rick Stansberger

Didn't you have john and hane along with jack? I liked that.

Rick

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #19 on: September 30, 2007, 06:44:48 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

you make me giggle.
I did have her looking for johns and jills and jack
but I decided jack was what she really wanted all along!

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #20 on: October 09, 2007, 06:33:23 PM » by Desiree Wright

Title. Seems like you could put a period between jack and shit and get even more mileage out of that line.
Thanks for the read.

D

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #21 on: March 08, 2010, 07:18:44 AM » by silent lotus

dear Lavonne

felt it was time to dust this off

hope that it finds its way one day to the front page

a warm smile
silent lotus

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #22 on: March 08, 2010, 10:20:58 AM » by Rick Stansberger

Good job, SL. I'm glad to see this one again.

Rick

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Rick's fifth book is out: Gizmo--love, loss and the passion to know--in the first part of the last century.

Re: a gallery show
« Reply #23 on: March 08, 2010, 12:34:22 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Wow! Surprised me this morning you two!

Thanks!

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #24 on: March 12, 2010, 04:56:59 PM » by cherylleverette

lol @ "would you really say 'what the shit' ?" if she only knew, eh, Lavonne?

great poem, L.

enjoyed much,
cheryl

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Re: a gallery show
« Reply #25 on: March 12, 2010, 07:20:45 PM » by Lavonne Westbrooks

Damn straight Cher.:)

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