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Gitano Songs
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November 25, 2007, 06:59:59 AM »
by
Dax
about the dance
killing a virgin with a swan
sings withal, a spike in a lock
no key, to be carried away, with
nuances of revenge in just a song—
plain, ice-black on green
in a thrust of arrowed light, raw
she ran, disfigured brook by pant
and plume of white, fell by its hiss
— struck, by shadow, dark betrayal
it began, the fatal ballet God forgot
then, trapped upon a passing stage
made her world so small, to take a heart
so mighty, yet kiss this Devil's blade
with headless blood, she must, else be
— a crowd dying
DR
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Re: Gitano Songs
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November 25, 2007, 10:48:23 AM »
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larry jordan
DR, this works like an epistle. Extraordinary imagery and cohesive. A pick for sure.
larry
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November 25, 2007, 11:35:18 AM »
by
milner place
Surely sings, Don Rodrigo, I'll second that pick.
milner
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Re: Gitano Songs
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November 25, 2007, 01:15:34 PM »
by
Dax
Bien, Larry, Guillermo,
Write of gadji today and let others follow — for this, muchas gracias.
DR
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November 26, 2007, 04:41:17 AM »
by
Dax
¿Qué hiciste después?
for every five
there maybe one
born with the howl
— the witches' song
for every ten
maybe, a girl
will pass, in black
— never look back
DR
(Title: What did you do then?)
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November 26, 2007, 08:23:58 AM »
by
Lavonne Westbrooks
exquisite
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November 27, 2007, 03:56:46 AM »
by
Dax
New Mexico Pueblo
in a church made from string
put straight by the hillside
horses kick their nails—
hark that savage wind
as mounts lay dying
on the ground weeps a lonely son
DR
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November 27, 2007, 06:54:49 AM »
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milner place
Canciones de un mundo azul. Magnifico.
Guillermo
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November 28, 2007, 06:26:35 PM »
by
Desiree Wright
Oh dear, a poet.
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November 29, 2007, 02:54:34 AM »
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Dax
Quote from: Desiree Wright on November 28, 2007, 06:26:35 PM
Oh dear, a poet.
Hi Desiree
whatever blows your skirt up, I guess
I regret certain words to get passé
unfortunately, they fit in the mouth
of all kinds of folk, to swallow— or spit
as a symbolic battle siren, maybe
DR
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November 29, 2007, 03:31:33 AM »
by
Dax
grino
skin
to day, or not to day
I find, a broken space
between breaks, to speak
with irony — a little, lot less
lost, amid mud and rubbish
frayed shacks and shabby furniture
lame rikono and rabit cats, finding
time is meaningless, till all there is
to see are shortcomings, for a long
way-off, round here— miss you mister
This has been dedicated to the "night children" of Copsa Mica 2007
DR
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November 30, 2007, 02:45:03 PM »
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Rick Stansberger
Quote from: DR on November 26, 2007, 04:41:17 AM
¿Qué hiciste después?
Lovely.
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November 30, 2007, 04:21:09 PM »
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Dax
Quote from: Rick Stansberger on November 30, 2007, 02:45:03 PM
Lovely.
Hi Rick
bello, bello, bueno
whatsoever things are blue
whatsoever things are heavy
whatsoever things are simple
whatsoever things are beautiful
whatsoever things are lovely
whatsoever things are worthy
if there be any wealth and if
there be any one thing good —
it is the praise of a fellow
who thought well on these things
— for you, my friend
DR
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November 30, 2007, 05:46:40 PM »
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Desiree Wright
my mint meant as compliment but i'm
not sure it was unwrapped, someone
thought it was one of those cinnamon
kind that burn your tongue and leave
your mouth red. as far as hip flankers
go, i wear mine long, but my stride is
spread enough to let some words up.
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November 30, 2007, 06:47:54 PM »
by
Dax
Desiree
walkin' for a short time
searchin' for a long time
what a beautiful lady
— accord, accord
and not lost a friend
(I'm glad)
Dax
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