The Evidence

In the bushes. In the middle
of filtered light:

this
is the scene.

Wild Asian geese
squawk:

these
are the characters involved.

Haze, slimy needles of grass
and distant noise:

this
is the mood.

Empty, cement
solitude:

these
are the emotions.

People enter
and anxiety is added.

We do not know
their thoughts.

Their
own thoughts confirm this.

There are many complications
to the steady image.

I don't really care if you don't like this, EB! So HUMPH! :)

ha ha, you know what it is, its just, god I think I honestly miss the geese. ;)

Fine. You've got your geese. Any other requests?

The distance of the narrator is compelling and yet sterile and introspective all at once.

Interesting work.

Ahem! Thanks Larry. I am always interested in the psychological narrator.

No way! ED board! BeenawhiletomakeDUHcut. Thanks.


best,
joe